If you could change one thing about this book, what would
it be and why? First explain the part in detail. Then describe why you would want to change the part. Finally, show what you would do differently. If you enjoyed the book, and don’t want to change anything, which part of the book would you like to expand? Maybe you want to know more about a relationship between two characters, or maybe you want to know more about a scene. Make sure you include why you wanted to know more. |
I think I would change the Taliban, because they are so mean and nasty. The situation is that the Taliban are beating everyone for doing something they don't like or just because they want to. I would want to change this because they Taliban aren't very nice. I wouldn't hit them I would talk to them. I did like the book, the part I wanted to be longer was when Father got taken away (that was very interesting). I wanted to know more because it left you hanging.
ReplyDeleteI would like to change the ending of the book. I would like to change it because I hated how it left you hanging. IT says that Parvanna is going to leave and that Shauzia is going to leave to aand that they are going to meet but then it just says that and leaves you there wanting to know more.If i did the book i would not let you hanging and just write the whole series in one book. I enjoyed the ending and that i would like to expand it to know more. I wanted to expand because i wanted to know if the family would reunite again.
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